Portfolio for Writing IV, Section 1A
(See: Note 1, below)
(See: Note 1, below)
0.0. OVERVIEW
Reviews, Posts, Words, and More
(See: Note 2, below.)1.0. ESSAYS
(See: Note 3, below.)
1.1. Showcase | Short titles with links to blog posts | Dates yyyy.mm.dd | ¶ | W | C | L | P | M |
| 2-01a (2009.10.07) | essays2-02a Japanese lifestyle! I found nice site! | 2009.10.07 | 5 | 266 | 10 | 0 | 0 | 0 |
| 2-01b (2009.10.21) | Essays2-01b My favorite place is my nearest place!! | 2009.10.27 | 0 | 0 | 0 | 0 | ||
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| 2-02a (2009.11.04) | | 2009.10.28 | 4 | 2 | 0 | 0 | ||
| 2-02b (2009.11.18) | essays2-02b You can better trip! | 2009.11.11 | 1 | 2 | 0 | 0 | ||
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| 2-03a (2009.12.02) | essays 2-03a I learned my language with my circomstances!! | 2009.11.25 | 3 | 0 | 0 | 0 | ||
| 2-03b (2009.12.18/22) | essays2-03b The long way to learn lunguage! | 2009.12.16 | 0 | 0 | 0 | 0 | ||
| (2-03c) | ||||||||
| Totals | --- | --- | 18 | 4 | 0 | 0 |
1.2. Most Improved Essay
(See: Note 4, below.)Selection and Assessment:
I think “Essays2-01b My favorite place is my nearest place!!” is the most improvement, because I could know that I had to support the sentence thanks to comments. These comments were from my classmates. I also improved the paragraphs. Before my essay was corrected, I didn’t mind the paragraphs. But I found the importance of paragraph. The paragraphs can make someone’s understanding.
Moreover, I had some easy mistakes, so I felt the importance of correcting myself thanks to this essay. So, I think this essay is the most improved essay for me.
2.0. COMMENTS
Showcase | Short titles of posts with links | Dates of comments yyyy.mm.dd | Numbers of words in comments | Qualities of comments** |
2.1. Your first comment on your instructor's blog* | "BR2-04:Stories of Gnomes & Goblins" | 2009.08.10 | 24 | I have same hobby with her, so I commented this blog |
2.2. Your best comment on a classmate's blog* | "Essay 2-03a : Most important thing" | 2009.12.16 | 26 | I also have my important thing, her important thing is very impressive for me. |
2.3. Best comment by a classmate on your blog* | Essays2-01a My favorite place is my nearist place!! | 2009.12.09 | 24 | |
2.4. Most comments on: | Short titles of posts with link | Dates of posts yyyy.mm.dd | Total number of words in comments | Qualities of comments** |
2.4.1. Any one of your essays* | Essays2-01a My favorite place is my nearist place!! | 2009.12.09 | 254 | They advised me to improve better, and I could make better essay! |
2.4.1.1. When did you respond to those comments? | --- | 2009.12.09 | --- | --- |
2.4.1.2. How did you respond to those comments? | --- | --- | 24 | I responded them with thanks! And I make use of these comments for improve my essays |
2.4.2. Any of your other posts* | essays2-02a Japanese lifestyle! I found nice site! | 2009.10.28 | 91 | Their comments made my essays better. |
2.4.2.1. When did you respond to those comments? | --- | 2009.11.04 | --- | --- |
| 2.4.2.2. How did you respond to those comments? | --- | --- | 25 | I responded them with thanks. And I also commented on their essays! |
* Current semester comments on essays and other posts
** Please list the most important qualities of comments on each type of blog post. That is, explain briefly what makes comments good.
2.5. Recent comments display
Does your blog display recent comments from blog visitors in a prominent location, for example, in a sidebar, header, or footer widget? Where, or why not? Please explain.- ... I display recent comments from blog visitors in a footer.
2.6. Additional reflections on comments
- .... Hi Hanae, thank you for your comment! Please make use of my site when you want to know Japanese things in English!!
- .... hank you for your comment, Kyoko!
I want to go to Europe, because there are many countries and I will be able to face many historical places!
3.0. BOOK REVIEWS
3.1. Showcase | Short titles with links | Dates: yyyy.mm.dd | Words | Comments |
Example: | 2007.05.16 | 39 | 1 | |
BR 2-01 | 2009.08.17 | 133 | 0 | |
BR 2-02 | 2009.08.17 | 103 | 0 | |
BR 2-03 | 2009.08.19 | 111 | 0 | |
BR 2-04 | 2009.08.19 | 120 | 0 | |
BR 2-05 | 2009.08.21 | 168 | 0 | |
BR 2-06 | 2009.08.21 | 120 | 0 | |
BR 2-07 | 2009.08.24 | 122 | 0 | |
BR 2-08 | 2009.08.24 | 144 | 2 | |
BR 2-09 | 2009.12.31 | 144 | 0 | |
BR 2-10 | 2009.12.31 | 94 | 0 | |
BR 2-11 | 2009.12.31 | 137 | 0 | |
BR 2-12 | 2010.01.15 | 74 | 0 | |
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Note: Please calculate and list book review Totals for words and comments without including those from the example (above).
3.2. Best Book Review
Selection and Assessment: Which of those book reviews do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, focus on your writing, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.BR2-11 Pirates and war!
- I think this Book review is the best, because it has the back ground of appearance of pirates. And I also have my feeling.
4.0. BLOG LAYOUT, LABELING, LINKING, and MEDIA
Showcase | Yes | No |
| 4.1. Does your blog display an archive? | ○ | |
| 4.1.1. Does the archive display the titles of posts? | ○ | |
| 4.1.2. Is the archive organized by month? | ○ | |
| 4.1.3. Is the archive at or near the top of the sidebar? | ○ | |
| 4.2. Does your blog display a cloud or list of labels in the sidebar? | ○ | |
| 4.2.1. Do your labels include these required labels (typed accurately): | --- | --- |
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| 4.2.2. Does your sidebar display other labels? | ○ | |
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| 4.3. Links and media | --- | --- |
| 4.3.1. Do your blog posts this semester include photos or other graphics? | ○ | |
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| 4.3.2. Does your blog include posts with multiple links? | ○ | |
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| 4.3.3. Does your blog include other media? | ○ | |
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4.4. Overall presentation
What have you done to enhance the overall presentation and readability of your blog? List and explain the three most important content, display, formatting, layout, or other presentation changes that you have made on your blog this semester.- ... I have paid attention to the composition of my blogs, and I also have done to the topic sentence.
- ... I attached some pictures in order to be easy to read.
- ... I usually have replied my friends' comment and I rewrite some blogs with referring their comments.
5.0. ADDITIONAL REFLECTIONS ON YOUR BLOG AND YOUR WRITING FOR IT
Please feel free to include reflections on both class work and homework, as well as on the content of this portfolio (proto-portfolios, showcases, selections, and reflections).- ... I could practice the typing ability through the homework!
- ... I also learned about my improving things, I need to improve my English and I sometimes made mistakes carelessly. I noticed that I have to study the basics of English!
- ... When I viewed my friends' blog, I knew many new ideas for attracting other people. Their personalities made me laugh and I could enjoy their story!
6.0. ADVICE AND SUGGESTIONS FOR YOURSELF, YOUR PEERS, AND YOUR SUCCESSORS
- ... To my self; I should practice the basics of English. For example, one of the basics is grammar.
- ...To my peers; They have very nice topic, but sometimes I feel a little short. I want know the story more.
- ...To my successors; I think blogging is difficult to keep, so you need to have motivation for the long terms. However this blogging makes your English better! And it is important to enjoy write a blog! I think you have the many way to enjoy your blogging!! Have a nice blogging.
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Notes:
- This portfolio template derives from Writing Studio Blog templates for Writing IIIc and Writing IVc (2007-08), Writing III, §§1a & 1c, Writing IV: Portfolio, §§1a & 1c (2008-09), and the July 7, 2009, Portfolio for Writing III.
- Please use the same code in section 0.0 that you used to embed your proto-portfolios (PPFs) in the footer of your blog, which you should already have revised to display your 2nd (fall) semester PPF first.
- The essays section (1.0. Essays, above) derived from Proto-Portfolio 2-02 (2008).
- The essay selection and explanation item (§1.2, above) differs from that in the July 7, 2009, Portfolio for Writing III. Please read the new item carefully before making a selection.
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